Pantoum The Pantoum is a repeating form. It is written in linked 4-lined verses, usually rhyming abab, in which the second and fourth lines of each verse become the first and third lines of the next.
The form of the Pantoum comes full circle as the unrepeated first and third lines of the first verse are used, in reverse order, as the second and fourth lines of the last verse. As a result, the opening and closing lines of the poem are identical.
The Pantoum had its origins in the fifteenth century, in what is now Malaysia, as a short folk poem. In his notes to Les Orientales, Victor Hugo introduced the Pantoum to European poets. He showed that lines one and two deal with different subjects from lines three and four, the only link being that of rhyme.
The Pantoum was also popular in the nineteenth century with the French poets, Charles Baudelaire and Theodore de Banville and the English poet Austin Dobson. As the use of the Pantoum spread, the form was adapted; rhyme and shortness were no longer important.
Present day Pantoums can be of any length or line-length and often appear unrhymed. In some modern poems, it is only end words that are repeated rather than whole lines.
John Drury in The Poetry Dictionary states: 'In each quatrain, lines 1 & 2 are independent of lines 3 & 4. They deal with different subjects entirely'. I have tried to follow the original rules of repeated lines and of having lines 3 & 4 independent of lines 1 & 2 but my example, below, keeps an ‘imagery’ link throughout the whole poem.
The Summer Fair
by Wendy A. Nottingham.
                   High on the hill, where a thick forest grows,                                       The treetops glisten with an azure crown.                    The valley walls echo with sweet bird calls.                                       Music dances with laughter in carefree measure.                    A townspeople’s fair was arranged for High June.                                       A ribbon-decked knight lifts his shield and his lance. A Note on Formal and Free Verse
A Fixed Form
I am grateful to Wendy Nottingham for providing the material for this page.
                   The treetops glisten with an azure crown.
                   The traveller rests and a cooling breeze blows.
                   The road stretches far towards the town.
                                      The valley walls echo with sweet bird calls.
                                      The road stretches far towards the town.
                                      Sunlight strikes beauty on the castle walls.
                   Music dances with laughter in carefree measure.
                   Sunlight strikes beauty on the castle walls.
                   Gossamer-filled breezes bring cheer and pleasure.
                                      A townspeople’s fair was arranged for High June.
                                      Gossamer-filled breezes bring cheer and pleasure.
                                      The lord turns his lady to a quick merry tune.
                   A ribbon-decked knight lifts his shield and his lance.
                   The lord turns his lady to a quick merry tune.
                   A falcon soars free in a breathtaking dance.
                                      The traveller rests and a cooling breeze blows.
                                      A falcon soars free in a breathtaking dance,
                                      High on the hill, where a thick forest grows.
Literary Terms
Metre
Triolet
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